October Girl

(Lexy) I glared at Reed, everyone knew I was pissed too I think we all were. I walked up to Reed and pushed him as hard as I could with ...

wow, impressive. I think you did a pretty good job. I think you described your characters thoroughly and you made everything a perfect image in my mind. Good luck and ...

Of course! I always do, I thought it was just me. :lol: but I either write on a napkin, my shoes or my hand. lol

Ha! I thought it was just my computer... guess the whole site had problems too. :lol: thanks alot Nate :D

(Lexy) I sat in the top of that tree trying to figure out where to go next, with the flock that is... I blinked a couple of times and then ...

I love that movie, good choice Rei! 8/10

6/10 ok. Sure why not?

(Lexy) My stomach started to hurt, like all feeling came back to me. I shook my head, I was hungry but I didn't need food. I didn't really know if ...

(Lexy) When the food came around I refused, I was thinking. I didn't know exactly what but still, I was thinking and I wasn't hungry... Or was I? I didn't ...

WOW... I'll tell you what a good way. -Max

I love torturing my characters! I don't know why maybe I'm a bad person but I just love it. Sometimes when I'm depressed and I torture a character I feel ...

(Lexy) I couldn't sleep, for some reason. I had a feeling something bad was going to happen, something very very bad. My eyes fluttered. My eyelashes were too long, kinda ...

A name of a boring book .... sorry your a new member I shouldn't be picking on you. My apology. -Max

Every rain drop that falls from this broken sky, and if the pain comes our life is just a lie. We can just sit here and pretend like our love ...

Wow, this is really good. I'm blow away! You should extend this... and if you do, I'd like to know. So I can read the rest!